La classe de M. Boyer

7e année

Writing - Revisions and Editing on paragraph about self due Tuesday

Students have been writing a paragraph about themselves. Today they were taught how to do a three step revisions/editing process. The three step revisions/editing process, done on their rough draft is due on Tuesday. Here are the three steps:

  1. chose a color. Find 3 words to change into a triple scoop word.
  2. choose a different color and find three spelling or grammar mistakes (can have more if they see more!)
  3. use a third color and choose 1 sentence to rewrite in a different, maybe more interesting, way.


Mme Cheryl Gagnon
Ecole St. Margaret
8ième année